Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In
today’s
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today’s music world,
world
,
music
has aroused people’s discussion everywhere. It is sometimes argued that
music
has the potential of gathering people cross-culturally even if they are from different ages. I completely agree with
this
statement and
this
essay will clear it. There are many reasons that I consist
music
is
one
of the best ways for building strong relationship between different people.
Firstly
, it is
one
of the most popular hobbies in all around the
world
, so there are uncountable clubs, bands and groups which people could gather and have fun together.
Secondly
,
music
can create
spiritual connection
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a spiritual connection
between folks. What happen in sport events is a good example of it, as most of the team has their own cheering and when it plays, almost all of the fans will
song
in the near future
soon
it regardless of their age or nationality.
Finally
,
music
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the music
creates an opportunity for folks to share their positive emotions.
For instance
, every year in carnivals around the
world many
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world, many
people wine
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people, wine
, dine, and dance with each other, no matter how old are they or where are they from.
Moreover
, there are many evidence based
researches
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research
which indicate that
music
can be used as a therapeutic approach foe
vide
having great (or a certain) extent from one side to the other
wide
variety of disorders or mental struggles.
For example
, it is reported that a couple
session
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sessions
of
music
therapy, could be helpful for treating anxiety in none sociable peoples and connecting these peoples with their peers. Beside all these
discussion
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discussions
, there is a general fact about the art which claim that art is the mutual language of all people, as
music
is
one
of the different forms of arts,
consequently
it could have the essential power for bringing people together. In conclusion, it is especially important at
this
time which
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time, which
world
appears to be more divided than every time, finding a way to build a cross-cultural relationship between people. I do believe that
music
could definitely be
one
of
this
way regarding its potentials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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