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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops In town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

#growth #shops #town #cities
Nowadays, people are being influenced by the online shopping.They are getting several benefits from that.
This
 tendency has led some people to say that
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 growth of online shopping will be a reason for dying out of
tradition
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traditional
 shops in town and cities.
Hence
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I agree as much as disagree with
this
 statement. There are fewer reasons to agree with
this
 sentence.
Firstly
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the most considerable reason behind it
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will be a lack of
time
 for people. To elaborate
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in today's rapidly changing world
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people
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who spend their most of
time
 in their work
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have scarcity of
time
.
Thus
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apparently do not have enough
time
 to visit
individual shop
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an individual shop
 and do shopping.Eventually
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online shopping will be less
time
 consuming sort of shopping for them.As the local shop will be neglected by
such
 people in near future.
Secondly
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online shopping is becoming more convenient for consumers.To illustrate
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since
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customers are provided with a tremendous offers and benefits on different products at low cost
compare
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compared
 to the local shops
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people will not so keen to buy that same
products
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product
 from their nearby shops.
In
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On
 the contrary, in buying some rudimentary things
such
 as milk
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sweets and other dairy products
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in
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
 people would not put trust on online shopping.
Thus they
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Thus, they
 will have to go outside for shopping
such
 things from local shops.
Moreover
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somepeole
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simply
simple
 do not compromise with the quality of products.
Thus they
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Thus, they
 will purchase
ther
of them or themselves
their
the
other
 desire products from local shops after ensuring the quality of it rather than purchase just only showing the images of products on online shopping. To conclude
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undoubtedly
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The trend of online shopping will be increased day by day
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but
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the exhaustion
exhaustion
 of local shops will be
also
 remained.

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