Major companies use sports events to promote their product. Some people think it has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some multinational companies
sponsor
major sports events in order to advertise their products. Some people have positive opinion about
this
, while others believe that there are certain downsides to
this
. In my opinion, when multinational companies
sponsor
sporting events, it is advantageous for them and the sports. When big companies
sponsor
sports events, both the parties benefit. Sports events are promoted and people will be motivated to participate in various sports activities.
In addition
to
this
, talented youngsters may get inspired by the fame and money that accomplished players get and will want to pursue a career in sports. By showing their advertisements during these events, companies which
sponsor
them
people in general
they
can reach more consumers.
Thus organizations
Accept comma addition
Thus, organizations
will get more profit. Many firms
such
as Airtel, Idea and Pepsi funded many sports competitions and
this
enhanced their publicity.
On the other hand
, there are
also
certain drawbacks to
this
. It may deflect the attention of people from sports to their products.
In addition
, when ads are shown during sporting events, they may dampen the spirit and enthusiasm of the spectators.
Hence
it may not arouse
real sports spirit
Suggestion
the real sports spirit
in people. In conclusion, even though product adverts distract viewers of sports competitions to a small extent, sports events are promoted to a great extent during these competitions which are sponsored by big multinational firms. So it is good that sports events are sponsored by big organizations.
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