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You have heard that your company is organissing a language training abroad for a limited number of participants. write a letter of interest. state your position in your company explain why they should include you in the training explain how your training could benefit you and your company

#company #language #participants #interest #position #benefit
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to you in connection with
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 training offered by our firm in Spain. Which I believe is beneficial not only for my growth
,
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 but
also
 for the company. Let me explain
you
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further
. I have been working as a human resource manager at your organisation
since
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last
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 5 years, and I have 300 employees working under me. I have to give instructions to these workers in order to progress the workforce smoothly.
Also
, I am dealing with few international clients from Spain. The reason I believe the company ought to select me for
this
 course
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 most of the employees are speaking in Spanish.
However
, I am new to
this
 language and due to
this
 language problem, I am facing lots of communication issues with them these days. I would highly suggest that
this
 course will be really helpful to me as well as to the company. As I can make the workers work more efficiently the more growing result the firm can attain.
Therefore
, I request you to consider me
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this
 abroad training. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely,

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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