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Some people believe that education success mostly depends on teachers. Others however say that it depends more on the attitude of student and their willingness to study. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Even though many argued that educational achievements depends more in the attitude of student and their
willingness
 to study, no one can deny that for the academic
success
 of the student will
depends
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depend
 on
teacher
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the teacher
. In my point of view
both
 factors are
interelated
reciprocally connected
interrelated
interrelate
interacted
 with each other.
This
 essay will discuss
both
 views and my own opinion.
To begin
 with, that the teachers are impacting on
student's educational goal achievement
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the student's educational goal achievement
 by teaching and guiding them properly towards the achievement. Teachers can motivate
child
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a child
the child
children
 as well as they can clearly identify strengths and weaknesses of the
child
. Through
this
 they would be able to correct the weakness of the
child
 and to lead them for their academic achievements.
On the other hand
,
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used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
even
 though how much the
teacher
 teach and motivate the students, they would not be able to achieve higher educational
success
 unless they have
willingness
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willed
 and positive attitudes towards the
education
. Even though how much the
teacher
 is qualified it will not affect for
success
of
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on
 academic performance if,
willingness
 is not there and on the other
way
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way, although
although
 how much
child
 is willing and have positive attitudes towards
education
 does not make
achivement
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the achievement
achievement
 if,
teacher
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the teacher
a teacher
 is not qualified.
Therefore in
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Therefore, in
 my opinion,
both
 factors are inextricably intertwined with the
success
 of
child's
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the child's education
a child's education
education
. The
teacher
 should be well qualified and trained person to understand
chlid's
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clouds
 strengths and weaknesses as well as there should be
willingness
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a willingness
 and attitude towards the study within the
child
 for higher educational achievements. In conclusion, even many argued that the academic achievements depend on
teacher
 while others believe it is depend on
child's
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the child's willingness
a child's willingness
willingness
 and attitude, from my point of view I believe
both
 quality
teacher
 and
child
's attitudes towards the
education
 are inextricably intertwined.

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