The graph gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information and reporting the main features.

The graph gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information and reporting the main features.
The graph shows how many people, coming from each part of the globe, arrive to visit a continent, depending on years. The tourist in North
America
rose quickly from 1990 to shortly after 2000, with a surge of 20 millions of people;
next
, we can observe the number of visitors levelled off until 2005. The situation was different in Central and Eastern Europe: in 1990 there were only 30 millions of arrivals
while
in 2005 the tourists were the same of North
America
. As a matter of fact, in the first period, the visitors went up sharply and swiftly,
next
, from 1995 to 2000, the proportion climbed less than
last
time and
at the end
, with an increase of 30 million of people only between 2000 and 2005, the continent reached North
America
. If we compare South
America
and Sub-Saharan Africa, we can find a similar trend,
in other words
a slight rise from the beginning to the end. The substantial difference was between 2000 and 2005, where Africa was able to sponsor itself and achieved more visitors than South
America
: just over of 20 million for the first one and approximately 13 millions for the
second
one. For Asia, the trend was almost the same, first a slow surge and
then
a rapid increase. Its tourists went up 30 million, during years considered.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
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