Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Myriads of people every year migrate from their home country to a foreign
land
.
This
has a significant impact
in
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on
society and people. The essay below expounds the prime causes of immigration and their potential consequences. There are plenty of reasons as to why people decide to reside in a foreign
land but
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land, but
to sum up, it all boils down to dearth of opportunities available.
This
is because people often find discontentment with their circumstances and as
grass
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the grass
is always greener on the other side, people jump ship seeking for a life that provides them more choices than they have now.
For instance
, residents of
third
world countries migrate to developed countries to have better opportunities of employment, housing, health, education and many more. There are multitude people leaving their
land
because of inhospitable environment as well.
For instance
, we often see
Pakistanis move
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a Pakistanis move
the Pakistanis move
to foreign soil because of continuous war and violence. On the other side, immigration has a plenty of drawbacks which are hard to ignore.
First
, the indignant people and the immigrants might not always co-operate well.
This
is because native people may perceive immigrants taking advantage of them.
Such
is the case in the UK. People there are vindicating immigrants of stealing their jobs which
has resulted
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have resulted
in a major backlash.
Second
, when unchecked, it can cause safety issues. Individuals with malice in their hand can cross borders and potentially harm the local population. To sum up,
majority
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the majority
of people settle in a foreign
land
because of the
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
available. Despite having a lot of benefits, immigration can result in
serios
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
issues
such
as violence and safety hazards.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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