Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Information

technology

is one of the most important aspect of our life. And it is marching towards

achme

an inflammatory disease involving the sebaceous glands of the skin; characterized by papules or pustules or comedones

acne

day

, with high speed. But, as it has its pros, it

also

has its

cones

an argument opposed to a proposal

cons

which affects our

day

today

Suggestion

to day

living, at home as well as at work. I personally think, it is not as it looks like, and it has many positive things attached to it.

Firstly

, I would like to put light on the things, which we can do, by seating in

house

Suggestion

the house

. There are many different works, which we can complete online,

instead

of going and standing in line. All types of bills like electricity, water, TV, and house rent can be paid from

anywere

at or in or to any place

anywhere

, in a click of

button

Suggestion

a button

. I Know a person, of age 65, who used to stand in line for all

this

work,

now

referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present

pay all

Accept comma addition

pay, all

bills in

house

Suggestion

the house

seating

(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)

sitting

on a chair.

hence

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

Hence

, information

technology

has abated all time and the extra efforts we used to put to complete

this

works. Moving

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

, we can

also

talk to people who are way far from us.

for

Suggestion

For

example, we can call as well as see them on mobile through

skype

Suggestion

Skype

whats

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what's

app

spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position

. It

hepled

give help or assistance; be of service

helped

us to keep in touch with our loved once, even if they are away from us. There is a neighbour of mine, who

talkes

a discussion intended to produce an agreement

talks

takes

talked

to his

doughter

a female human offspring

daughter

who is in

canada

a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada

Canada

, on

whats

Suggestion

what's

app video call. So the

technology

has

Suggestion

has also brought

also

bring people closer even if they are far from you.

is, there are many news

chanels

official routes of communication

channels

, which shows every

day

news to us.

news

Suggestion

The news

News

keeps us updated about many things which in turn helps to improve

aur

of you or yourself

your

general knowledge. It is very easy to access news from our mobile.

one

Suggestion

One

can simply take out his mobile from

pocket

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the pocket

a pocket

, and by opening any application, can see live news. In conclusion, I would like to say that information

technology

has

redused

made less in size or amount or degree

reduced

our stress and frustration by making our

day

today

Suggestion

to day

work

easy

Suggestion

easier

and

hence

outweigh the disadvantages.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative?

Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.