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To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

#information #technology
Some people may think that
information
technology
 is an important issue of today's life and that it affects in all parts of it or even that it rules above our own control. I think that we can handle the
technology
 of
information
 in order to take the greatest profit of it. Alongside the years
technology
 has given people the opportunity of being updated with the
last
 news from all over the world and with lots of
information
 about hundred of topics that you can find easily, but there is
also
 a dark side of having easy access to so many sources of
information
, one them is that you can be exposed to other people's lies and to hoaxes in which case you are going to have the wrong informatión and might take wrong choices if you trust and take
desitions
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
 based on it. On the other side having the opportunity of being updated with the
last
 news and having access to so much
information
 is a privilege that people in the past did not have. Nowadays it is easy to turn on our computers and connect to
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 and there we will find many different sources
were
In or at or to what place
where
 we can get
information
 from and it is fast and free. If you want to look up for any specific topic, If you want to know the breaking news from another country or even if you want to know about your relatives or friends, all
this
information
 is easy to find, cheap to use, quickly to get and you can even do it from the
confort
a state of being relaxed and feeling no pain
comfort
comforts
 of your bed, and if you want to make sure that the
information
 you get is reliable you could compare among the sources and resources
were
In or at or to what place
where
 you found the
information
 and see
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
witch
 themes appear in all of them and
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
wish
 don't. I think
technology
Suggestion
the technology
 is here to make our life easier and not to make it more complicated, is just a matter of making a responsible and
conciously
Suggestion
conscious
consciously
 use of all tools that we were given.
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