Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child development. However, others argue that other things like Television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many factors play an imperative role in human development. It is often thought by many people that parents perform the crucial role in bringing up their children. While, others believe that other factors

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as Television and friends

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have a great impact on a

child

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. I am going to shed a light on both these

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notions, followed

by my opinion. Parents are considered the backbone of

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child’s nature

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the child’s nature

and character because they have a direct interaction with their children. They teach their children how to be a good human being. They have a great influence on

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child's socializing process

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the child's socializing process

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provide them

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a sense

of identification.

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, they teach them about moral values and etiquette's to spend a pleasurable life.

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, parents know their

children

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child's

children's

child

temperament better than anyone else.

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, it is a fact that whenever we get sad due to any random

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reason, then

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mother is the one who always knows what is

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happening

to us. Friends,

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, have a strong relation with

children emotions

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children, emotions

and feelings because after their early years, they spend most of their time with their friends. When a

child

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emotionally unstable owing to family problem or anything

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else, then

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friends encourage

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friends, encourage

them and give motivation to solve the problem.

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, the effect of TV is the combination of several characteristics

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as how much they watch television, with whom they watch and which TV channel they watch because all of these have a significant impact on teenagers.

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, if both of the parents are too occupied in their work and do not have a time for their

children

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children, then

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children automatically move towards other things to find love and attention. To conclude with, in my perspective, parents, friends and

Television all

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Television, all

of these have a considerable influence on

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child's development

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a child's development

the child's development

at a certain time of age. So, parents should keep their eyes on every activity of children.