Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days women are contributing to almost every profession compared to the past. A part of the society said that women should
also
get the same opportunity as men on the military force, while others seem to disagree with it. In Linking Words
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of all, gender equality is a very important thing in every aspect. Gender equality does not always mean that women want to be the same as men. Linking Words
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, it is about the rights that women should get proportionately. Linking Words
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of lower than men, just because of their gender.
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, many people assume that women's physical features are built to be not as strong as men. From what I know, not all women are weak. Linking Words
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is an army officer in the health department. It shows that to join the military, does not mean that you should go to the field and fight.
In conclusion, we should support and respect women's right to decide whatever job they want to do. Particularly iSuggestion
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