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Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#stores #food #products
I agree with the statement that" stores should sell local foods and not imported foods
product
" Imported
foods
Suggestion
food
 products has slot of preservatives. These preservatives have been proven by research
,
Accept space
,
to be
casinogenic
causing or tending to cause cancer
carcinogenic
carcinogens
Ie
Suggestion
IE
is
 cause
cancer
. Another form of preservative is the irradiation of these
foods
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food
product
Suggestion
products
 which predisposes one to
cancer
,
such
 as prostate
cancer
, lung
cancer
, and cervical
cancer
, just to mention a few. Local
foods
Suggestion
food
product
on the other hand
 has less preservative, making it more reliable. Imported
foods
Suggestion
food
product
are
Suggestion
is
 more expensive compared to the local food products. Because of the exorbitant price of imported goods, people will get discouraged purchasing them, especially the low income earners.
This
 will affect negatively the income of the store owners. Store owners should sell local food to encourage youths to go into agriculture. Youth
are discouraged
Suggestion
is discouraged
 from practicing agriculture because of the competition in the labour market. If
stores
Suggestion
stores'
 owners patronizes these young farmers, they will be encouraged to produce more, and thereby improving the economy of the country concerned. In conclusion store owners should sell local foods because is delicious and retains it's original test

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