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Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being benefical, this is a danger to our societies. What are your views?

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For
Last
 one & half decades, the technologies get modernized in a very fast way, in communication and electronics, there is an invention in each three and a half seconds. It is really true that obtaining the new technologies is essential for the
socio
relating to human society and its members
social
-
economical
Suggestion
economic
 development, but still it is
also
 having a dark part that might cause
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 socio-economical crisis. Keeping both of
this
 point, the new
age
 of technology management systems should structure the overall development of
human era
Suggestion
the human era
 with a correct and flexible channel. Many of the industries (Like automobile, huge machineries, earth movers, etc.)
use
Suggestion
Use
 automation and information technologies to fasten and smoothen their
production
Suggestion
products
 in a very efficient way, in todays scenario.
This
 Process change is actually leading to reduce the human intervention in any of the business value chain
line
Suggestion
lines
, which are the main reasons of unemployment. In a broad
aspect it
Accept comma addition
aspect, it
 is creating the difference of wealth between classes of people in a country or society, ultimately hampering the
Socio
relating to human society and its members
social
 economical development of a society.
On the other hand
 the new
age
 of information & communication technologies is affecting the data privacy for individuals and organisation level,
this
 is a huge threat for us & a point to think about for our future. At the end of the discussion, I believe we can not alternate our technologies from our life, as for
this
 we can communicate with our peers, friends, families from thousands of miles away, we can see them through new
age
 of internet facilities.
Also
 the new
age
 of data science is helping various industries to focus more on the market and customer centric, it is
also
 profitable and adding more value not only to the business but
also
 to the society.
Hence
, beyond of all argument against technology modernization, we need the technology to develop ourselves.
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