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In many societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?

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In
this
 contemporary
time
, where children are a part of constant competition of evolving themselves they hardly get any spare
time
 to spend with their kins. I believe that
this
 trend of spending any quality
time
 with
preceders
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
procedures
 may result as a lack of inherited family values and traditions in children and can create a void in the
life
 of the grandparents.
This
 essay will examine the
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
 repercussions of
this
 trend with supporting evidences.
To begin
 with, our ancestors are considered the natural transmitters of values, traditions and knowledge of
life
 which they had received by various experiences of the
life
. Spending
time
 with them can give opportunity to kids to gain learnings of family traditions, their culture and many facts of
life
, which are very important for any child to learn to get success in
life
.
However
, in recent times the joint family is disintegrating into nuclear families,
consequently
,
child
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the child
 fails to get these
life
 values and family culture inculcated in them.
For example
, the study
by
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of
 the Howard School of Social Science proved that 30% of the
second
 generation immigrants faces problems in identifying their own traditions. The elders are
also
 adversely affected by
this
 trend, the sociologists are of the opinion that
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the elders required warmth of the family and their support in the later stage of the
life
.
However
, they can hardly see any of the family
membersespecially
Accept comma addition
members, especially
members especially
 their grandkids except weekends for few hours due to the busy
scedule
plan for an activity or event
schedule
 of the parents of the child, which results as depression in many adults and eventually results in no family bonding. For
eg
as an example
e.g.
, the increasing number of the adults in the
oldage
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old age
 home clearly indicates the reducing family

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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