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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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More families considered to have children in their mature years compared to the previous years. Having a
child
 in the later age is considered to be simpler, due to the fact that families will have a certain amount of money.
Furthermore
, children are more likely to have a better
attention
 and influence from parents.
However
, give birth to children may be difficult for
mother
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the mother
 and it may affect children. It is easier to support a family when it has a certain amount of money. It is
therefore
 reasonable that having a
child
 in mature years gives
to
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until
 he/she a better opportunity to live in abundance.
Accordingly
, children will have a better childhood and conditions to develop and
growth
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grow
. A young one may have a better opportunity to have more
attention
 from parents when they are living in later age. Parents might be freer with a steady income,
therefore may
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therefore, may
 take more
attention
 to their children and attempting to raise significant personalities.
Moreover
, certain women may feel the appearance of maternal instinct in
the late
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later
 years.
However
, bear children in 35 or above may be difficult and it is definitely
effect
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effecting
effected
 to the health of children. After 30 the body of person will start the process of getting old,
consequently
 both mother and
child
 health will hurt. There are frequent cases when
child
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the child
a child
 was born from mother, who were above 35,
then
 it leads to the health problems or physical disability.
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Accept space
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prove
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Prove
 it by scientific evidence) In summary, the advantages of having children in mature years outweigh the disadvantages,
that is
 a better life and receiving more
attention
 may outweigh the risks of getting a disease both parents and children.

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