The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location .summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparisons where relevent.

The diagram below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location .summerise the information by selecting and reporting the mainfeatures and make comparisons where relevent.
This
diagram describes the structure how to work wave
energy
machine
and what is the perfect
location
of the
machine
. In
this
design
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waves
are used to produce the
electrocity
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electricity
.
Firstly
, I explain the design of
wave
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a wave
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energy
machine
that has two chambers from which one chamber is related to the
waves
from
sea
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the sea
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and another chamber is connected to the turbines and generator.As
fas
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far
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as,when
waves
and
water
levels air flow pass through the canal to
rhe
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the
other chamber and by that,turbines rotate
voluntary
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.
In
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I
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say way ,air flow from outside s
pass
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passes
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inside the
chamberthen
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chamber then
chamber than
the turbine
rotate
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also
after
this
process the generator would produce
electrocity
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electricity
as depend on the power of
air flow
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airflow
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. The
second
diagram shows the suitable
location
of
wave
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the wave
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energy
machine
.there are two
location
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in
this
structure .one
location
is deep-sea
water
and
second
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the second
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is mid-sea
water
.
In deep-sea
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Deep-sea
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water
has been too expensive because
hare
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the hare
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is larger
waves
are used to produce higher power of
energy
.
on the other hand
,
Mid -sea
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Midsea
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water
might less produce
energy
as
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apply
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copared
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compared
to
the
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apply
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deep-sea
water
because
which
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it
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may get only smaller
waves
.
However
,
cost
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the cost
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of installation is low in comparison to
yhe
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the
larger
waves
energy
machine
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, machine, location, waves, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 9 times.
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