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Excessive traffic has made cities unpleasant laces to live and work in, private cars should be completely banned from city centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Extreme city traffic has pushed people's
life
 into suffocation in terms of
leading
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the leading life
life
 and job. Many urge that
this
 can be controlled by completely
abanding
forsake, leave behind
abandoning
 usage of private cars
,
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,
which is not the correct law to solve the huge traffic congestion in my opinion.
Although
 personal cars are the major reasons
,
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,
other solutions
has
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have
 to be incorporated. Own cars provide us the
convenient
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convenience
 of being safe in case of emergency
,
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,
it may be towards health
,
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,
attending a
death funeral
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death, funeral
 or call from school about our kids and so on.
For instance
, if there is a situation of going to hospital because of cardiac arrest
,
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,
it is always a better option to use our owned cars rather than waiting for public transport like buses or cabs
,
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,
which is much time consuming.
This
 may not put us into grief of loosing a
life
. Another reason being the comfort and luxury it provides. It makes us feel
confortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
 to go outside with our own family
,
Accept space
,
spending a lot of time without hurry
,
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,
use the clock to our
convenient
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convenience
. Especially
,
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,
family
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the family
families
 having
small baby
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a small baby
are
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is
 in need of
four wheeler
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a four wheeler
,
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,
which makes us to handle the situation easily. To conclude, rather than putting a
fullstop
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full stop
 to private cars
,
Accept space
,
other remedies should be enforced because
majority
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the majority
 of the humans will be dependent for urgent requirement as well as for comfort
life
.
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