In some countries , not enough students are choosing science subjects for study. What are the causes behind this issue? What are the effects of this on society?

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It is suggested that in many parts of the world less sufficient students are being chosen to
study
in
science
stream.
This
problem is caused by two main reasons
,
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,
and
have
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has
detrimental effects on
society
. On the one hand students are not choosing
science
subjects for
study
because contain more theory as compared to
practical part
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the practical part
, and it is very difficult for students
to
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studying
study
these subjects as in the existing era students like to
study
interesting subjects and which are very helpful to develop their imagination and intellectual skills.
For instance
art, economics, commerce subjects are very beneficial for developing interest among pupils.
Moreover
,
science
subjects need more hard
work
and efforts to understand these because the curriculum of these subjects is very complicated. And without hard
work
it is impossible to get good scores in exams.
Consequently
, many students prefer
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
subjects
instead
of
science
, which do not need any hard
work
.
On the other hand
, having not enough students in
science
field has a negative impact on
society
.
This
is because for the growth of
society it
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society, it
is very important to have more experience persons who have a lot of knowledge about technology. As it is believed that
science
curriculum covers a wide range of information or subjects, if it is related to our daily life, technology.
For
instance only
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instance, only
scientists can give more information about our future happenings if it is on earth or any other planet. With the help of scientists any country or
society
can put
further
steps towards success.
However if
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However, if
the number of people in the field of
science
are decreasing
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is decreasing, then
is decreasing then
then
their
in or at that place
there
is no one who do
difficult
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the difficult work
work
for
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of
prosperous
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a prosperous society
society
. In conclusion, it seems to me that complex curriculum and lack of interest are the two main reasons behind few admissions in
science
subjects, and
this
will have a negative impact on
society
.
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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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