Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss possible arguments on both sides and say which side you personally support.
Over recent decades, there has been a growing debate on whether teenagers' spare
time
should be spent with family members or outside. It is increasingly common to find youngsters partying and chilling out with peers until hours end, or staring their eyes with gadgets. Use synonyms
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, while these can help building their social development and independence, I agree, to a large extent, with psychologists who feel that giving attention to parents and siblings is a lot more worthwhile due to building solidarity as well as safety.
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is because these social interactions are an imperative part of adolescents' lives and those who lack these may turn into introvert which has many drawbacks in their adult lives. Linking Words
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as skiing, running, dancing or driving by enrolling various courses that Linking Words
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for different locations outside.
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time
entirely to the parents and siblings can be advantageous in several ways. Use synonyms
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and foremost, it can dramatically improve solidarity among family members which is vital for a child's physical and intellectual well-being. Since these days, youngsters hardly get Linking Words
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whenever possible. Another crucial reason relates to having safe-favourable environment. When children spend Use synonyms
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with parents or other close members, it is highly likely that they could keep themselves away from many detrimental consequences by the Internet and social media. Clearly, Use synonyms
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can protect them from numerous potential perils Linking Words
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as cyber-attack, bullying, paedophile or, at least, gaming addiction.
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a happy-adult life. Many sagacious and forward-thinking guardians have already put Suggestion
into
this
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