It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

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In recent times, there has been a surge in
technology
wor
ld wide.
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
This
has led to the consideration by some people that,wi
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h the advancement in
technology
,ou
r
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original beliefs and way of life will be abandoned and
subsequently
lost.I,
however
,do
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not agree with
this
idea.Ana
lyzing, t
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Analysing
hat
technology
will cause an advancement in culture. It is considered that,th
o
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se who believe that tradition will be forgone in the
nearest fu
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the near
ture
as a result
of
technology
and modernization support their claims with the fact that
technology
has contributed grossly to the busy schedule of the modern person and
hence
,
ha
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,
s little or no time to engage in some things that were considered as the norm in the past.
For example
,pe
o
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ple would rather spend time on their phones and internet working, tha
n go
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then
to celebrate some festivities in their hom
e towns wi
the town (or city) where you grew up or where you have your principal residence
hometowns
th family.They believe the
co
people in general
they
uld just call them and video call them
instead
.
This
has somewhat reduced participation in
such
events and they are gradually losing their flare.
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,I
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gree with those who are of the opinion that,th
e
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,
current advancements in
technology
will not cause abandonment of our original ways of life. Rather, it will
further
enhance it.
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,th
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re is a popular festival in my country.Recently,du
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to
technology
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the internet
hey have been able to raise awareness by posting videos of the celebration on the net and
this
, has attracted more people and tourists.It has
also
served as a source of revenue generation for my state.
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hasn’t been
has not been
e case without the role of modernization. In conclusion,
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e good and bad aspects associated with the current race in
technology
as it relates to tradition.I am of the opinion that
technology
will result more in growth of culture and way of life than
otherwise
.As long as people are still interested in these traditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inevitable
  • traditional cultures
  • technological development
  • modern society
  • incompatible
  • decline
  • traditional crafts
  • rituals
  • digital communication
  • preserve
  • promote
  • documentation
  • online archives
  • virtual museums
  • social media
  • coexist
  • integrates
  • digital storytelling
  • augmented reality
  • cultural tourism
  • perspective
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