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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some people opine that companies who use sports event to advertise their products, it is an excellent way to show that for a large proportion of audience
allover
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all over
 the world.
In contrast
, some people believe that it has drawbacks by
manipulate
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manipulating
 consumers because of inferior quality. In my opinion,
that is
 will be beneficial for a
vast
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vastness
 of organization and individual
from
the phonological or orthographic sound or appearance of a word that can be used to describe or identify something
form
 as we will discuss now.
To begin
, there are a large proportion of people who see sports games and Olympic games events every day.
Thus
, in recent 50 year lots of these companies become an international because of widespread in all
continent
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continents
.
For example
, the European champions league event all youths and the old watches that championship;
therefore
, ADIDIAS and NIKE
always sponsoring
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are always sponsoring
 that event.
In addition
 to, it has
benefit
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the benefit
for
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of
 all governments get
high
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higher
rate taxes
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rate, taxes
 from these companies and the players who promote these brands, and individual to get employment opportunities.
On the other hand
, some people believe that not all stock
appear
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appears
 in these advertising
such
 as real experience and some time they do showcases harmful for health like tobacco and beer
such
 as Marlboro and
Heineken which
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Heineken, which
 should not be shown on the television because teenager just buying those products to support their teams. To conclude, there are lots of profit to sponsoring sports for individual and
organization there
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organization, there
 are disadvantages from these advertise because of harmful goods.
I personally
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I, personally
, believe that companies and consumers all same profits from these events.
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