the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of British students in England at a University who know to speak other languages apart from English in the
year
2000 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, Spanish was the highest spoken language in both the years, while
the minimum speaking was German for both the years.
The number of students who can speak Spanish were
30% in 2000 and has increased by 5% by 2010 and it remained the highest spoken language. Change the verb form
was
However
, the combined percent
of pupils who can converse in another and two other languages was 25% in 2000, which has increased by 5% in each language by 2010 with a total of 35%. Change the spelling
per cent
Whereas
, pupils who cannot speak anything other than English were 20% in 2000, and by 2010 the count decreased to 10%.
The novice
who can converse in German were only 10% in both the given years. Fix the agreement mistake
novices
Moreover
, pupils who can communicate in French were 15% in 2000, which has
decreased by 5% in 2010.Unnecessary verb
apply
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