Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should write at least 250 words.

some
Suggestion
Some
Information technology industries do not have any dress
code
like formal and
unformal
not formal
informal
.
some
Suggestion
Some
companies like cognizant having formal dress
code
in week days except
saturaday
the seventh and last day of the week; observed as the Sabbath by Jews and some Christians
Saturday
and
sunday
first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians
Sunday
. Dressing
code
is kind of mannerism to represent our attitude and confidence to others.
job
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
Job
Position
also
decides psychologically to make
an
Suggestion
a
dress
code
.
most
Suggestion
Most
of automobile sector
equipments manufactures
Accept comma addition
equipments, manufactures
maintain uniform for their workers from lower level to top level.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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