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In many countries, women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, most of the women are working full time for the financial growth of their family. So, I agree
to
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with
this
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
 because there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of advantages by sharing the
household
task
 for
both
 men and women.
To begin
this
, by sharing the
household
task
 equally it will
leads
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lead
 to a stress release family life. Because, it is very difficult to maintain
both
 office and
household
 work equally.
Thus
, it
give
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gives
 a high pressure to women. Another main advantage is
both
 of them know very well about the
household
task
, so they can be independent.
For instance
, the working people in IT department must have to take part in training or any meeting in far places, so that the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 one
in
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at
 home can be manage the house properly.
Also
, by sharing
these
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these tasks
this task
task
 is
also
 a gender-equality.
As a result
, the bonding of
couple
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couples
the couple
a couple
 will increase.
However
, there is some possibility of quarrel between couples. Because, the men didn’t have enough idea about the
household
task
. So they didn’t do it properly.
Thus it
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Thus, it
become
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becomes
 a big
problem in between the
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problem between the
 couples. In some cases, the men
works
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work
 over time for the financial stability of their family. In
such
 a case only one person can involve in doing
household
task
. In conclusion, I believe that sharing
household
task
 for a
men
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man
 and women will give a stress-release family life and
also
 they can live
independent
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independently
 in
such
 a circumstance. They can understand the difficulties of
both
 office and
household
 works, so they can share the distress of their family life.
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