Today,the high sakes of popular consumers goods reflects the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do u agree or disagree

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Sales
of end user goods had increased which shows the capacity of advertising not necessarily the needs of the nation where they are sold.
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some will argue that consumers go for the goods they need not minding the a
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a public promotion of some product or service
advert
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essay will agree with the fact that advertisements affect the sales of buyer goods not the societal needs.
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, notice on public media for promotion of products increases the awareness of
such
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products Making buyers informed.
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increases the sales as end buyers will usually go for products that they have seen others use. In making p
urchase
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purchases
of my cell phone
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I looked out for the most popular o
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ones, especially
on television g
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make a sound typical of metallic objects
jingles
noting their quality, durability and producers.
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influenced my choice without minding if the o
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one
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has
better quality.
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, models and popular celebrities are used for the sole purpose of advertising,
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makes
the public focus on
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products trying to imitate the models who are significant persons in the society.
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owever these
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However, these
products may not necessarily be needful or portray the qualities being advertised. Looking at fashion as a glaring example, celebrities may dress in a way that does not conform to the c
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country's
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norm, but
people from
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country may not mind purchasing s
ch
to so extreme a degree
such
dress since a famous person has used it.
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shows that
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the dress may not be u
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useful, but
some purchase it because of the value added by advertisement.
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advertisement has a great influence on consumer choices
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.
Some may argue that consumers purchase has nothing to do with a
dvertisement but
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advertisement, but
only on what the individual defines as important to them.
I agree tha
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t advertising have a strong role in making
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • high stakes
  • consumer goods
  • advertising power
  • real need
  • society
  • persuasive advertisements
  • artificial needs
  • social status
  • trends
  • consumer manipulation
  • psychological tactics
  • impulsive buying
  • distortion
  • basic needs
  • luxury desires
  • economic implications
  • perceived value
  • consumer awareness
  • informed consumers
  • marketing-driven appeal
  • consumer culture
  • essential living patterns
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