Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

Most

researchs

systematic investigation to establish facts

researches

research

have proven that leisure

time

is vital for the development of intellectual and physical abilities of children.

However

, with the highly competitive education

stucture

a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts

structure

, most people argue

this

time

as a waste. In my opinion, I believe every child

should has

Suggestion

should have

its own

time

to play.

To begin

with, adolescents need a certain

amount

of

time

to interact with the friends or do leisure

activites

any specific behavior

activities

. Each and every activity they involved in

this

time

is significant for their future. Because, they are able to capture few skills for the lives during

this

.

For instance

, a child who plays outdoor

games improve

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games, improve

the health and he or she would be able to learn the skills of situation handling and leadership.

Moreover

, children who would prefer to spend

time

with the computers learn the highly valued IT skills.

Hence

, free

time

is crucial for children to gather some tools for the years to come.

On the other hand

,

continous

continue a certain state, condition, or activity

continue

continuous

school work and exams generate some

amount

of stress on the minds of these youngsters. Most parents encourage their offsprings to get more marks on the exams, which

eventully

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

eventually

become a burden of them.

Therefore

, leisure

time

is

pvitol

being of crucial importance

pivotal

for

take

Suggestion

taking

their mind off and involve in

somthing

an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.

something

interesting.

For example

, studies have shown that most children who do not have any free

time

become isolated in the society and they tend to attempt

scuicide

the act of killing yourself

suicide

.

Therefore in

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Therefore, in

order to keep these developing minds free and

ethusiastic

having or showing great excitement and interest

enthusiastic

for life they require some

amount

of free

time

. In

concultion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conciliation

concussion

,

yougsters

a young person of either sex

youngsters

today are fed up with their schools work and exams. Because of that it is important to give them some

amount

time

to

relaese

release, as from one's grip

release

realise

realize

their stress as well as learn some skills that could not be

tought

impart skills or knowledge to

taught

thought

at schools.