Some people believe that students in school learn better when they studying in group whereas others believe students learn better when they study their own. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Traditionally,
school
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is the only place where
students
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can get their fundamental
education
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.
Education
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plays a vital role in our daily life; without
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education
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you can find yourself in
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an illiterate
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world. When the child
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hits
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4 years of age
;
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,
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the parents get him enrolled in
school
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.
School
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is the only place where everyone starts their primary
education
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. Now days most of the children prefer to
study
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in groups
but
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, but
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also
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many people feel that some pupils want to
study
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by self.
This
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essay will discuss both aspects and
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my personal opinion.
To begin
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with,
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is understood that
students
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spent
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spend
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their time in
school
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with
friends
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; it could be in
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the classroom
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,
playground
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the playground
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and
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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. As the
play
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students play
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games in
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team
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teams
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, so
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so
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the same
way
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way,
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they want to
study
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with
friends
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in a
group
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. Everyone has different perspectives and perception; they can share their knowledge and idea about the lecture in the
group
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so in the way
students
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can
study
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for exams and as well for
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projects and
as well as
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for
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assignments.
For instance
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,
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if
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the student
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apply
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fail
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fails
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to attend the lecture or
absent
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is absent
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from
the
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apply
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school
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so later on he or she can do the remaining
study
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with
school
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friends
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. On the other side of the
arguments
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argument
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, some
students
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prefer to
study
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by
oneself
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themselves
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; they don't want to
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within
the
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a
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group
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. Especially
some
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, some
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pupils waste their time during the
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in
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chatting and
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having useless
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discussion
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discussions
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with
friends
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in
group
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study
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.
In addition
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,
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when
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they
study
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alone, they can concentrate more
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then
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than
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the
group
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study
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.
For example
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,
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in
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library
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a library
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, majority
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majority of the
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the majority of
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people do their
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in a quiet environment because they want to bring full attention
on
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to
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the topic.
To sum up
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,
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it
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depends on the
students
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either
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whether
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they want
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study
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to study
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in
the
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apply
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groups or they want in isolation
both
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; both
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have
own
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their own
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advantages and disadvantages. Research has proved that those
students
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are more intelligent who do their
study
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in groups.

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task response
Make your view clear in the first part and repeat it in the end.
structure
Use one main idea in each paragraph and link it to the task.
content
Give examples that fit the idea and explain how they show your point.
content
The essay talks about both sides of the topic.
coherence
Some linking words are used to join ideas.
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