The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table illustrates the percentage of different types of families in Australia in 1999.
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which was exactly 21%, they were followed by single Fix the agreement mistake
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third
highest poverty Correct article usage
the third
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