The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
Line graph
visualise
the Change the verb form
visualises
number
of people traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
in
Change preposition
to
underground
station in London which Add an article
an underground
also
shocase
additional Correct your spelling
showcase
informations
comprises with it.
Usually, the Line Change the wording
information
pieces of information
graph
have
two relative Change the verb form
has
aspect
of the data. Change to a plural noun
aspects
Likewise
, here also
they took Correct article usage
the passengers
passengers
count and the Fix the agreement mistake
passenger
Time
from 6:00 to 22:00 which shows the number
of people travel in the particular time
. These passengers number
was take in underground station of London. At 8:00, There were around 400 people using this
underground station But at 6:00 and 16:00 there were few in number
nearly 100. Along this
graph
, It was more fluctuated and don't have any steady number
unlike in few hours between 11:30 and 14:00.
The given line graph
which start increasing in the early morning, decrease after 8:00 and also
again start increase after 10:00 but not as same in the beginning of the day. After the few hours of increase it start maintain a steady pleateau for the two hours. Although
, There were a more fluctuation found in post mid time
on comparing with the pre mid time
. EvenThough it got to fall after 18:00, After it reach the 20:00 it starts to rise up. Despite of the number
it comprise that there were also
some passengers are there who travel at the late night. At the last
hour also
the number
is not at all less than the starting number
.
To summarise this
graph
, Even they have more variation in their count, It always maintain a considerable count inspite of their time
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