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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefit does the tourism brings to individual and society?

#tourism #industry #benefit #society
Exploration of places
is
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has been
 always main favourite activity carried out by many people.
This
tourism
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tour
 is considered as the source of income in many countries.
Such
touristry
visited by throngs of tourists
touristy
 places are really an advantage to many individuals by increasing the employment alongside to the society by improving its economic status.
Firstly
,
tourism
 is the primary business for many local-
ates
studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)
arts
outs
ats
. As the visitors increases, there will be
a
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an
 increase in demand for traditional materials, which will be a hallmark of that area and which will not be available in any other part of the
world
. By selling
such
 things people will be engaged in a constant job.
For example
 the taste of Ooty
honey can't
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honey, can't
 be replaced by honey available anywhere in the
world
. Thereby retailing the honey the native people earn for their living. So
tourism
have
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has
 considerable impact on
individuals life
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an individual's life
individual's life
the individual's life
individuals' life
individual life
.
Moreover
,
tourism
 industry not only
en
to or toward the inside of
in
-lights the peoples
life but
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life, but
also
 the society. If the
visitors
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visitor
 count elevates income for the government
rises
come into existence; take on form or shape
arises
.
Thus
lot
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a lot
lots
 of countries in the
world
,
fund
come upon, as if by accident; meet with
find
 a huge of
sum
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a sum
 of money on
tourism
 development activities.
Furthermore
,
this
 will
leads
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lead
 to the preservation of the historical monuments and culture
by
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of
 the government to build up the rate of visitors. India is the land of temples, stands as the epicentre
to
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of
 the
world
. So, huge sum of money
is spend
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spends
 on maintenance of the architectural monuments.
Hence
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Hence, tourism
tourism
enhance
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enhances
 the society financially and help in retaining
this monuments
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these monuments
this monument
 with their historical values. To sum up,
tourism
 field is considered as profitable sectors for both individuals as well as the community.
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