Question: Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by technology?

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present generation, advancement in computer know how as overpowered manual education. The modern day world is presently making use of robotics and other technological device

instead

of man made efforts because they are reliable.

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the assignment

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are achieved faster with a good result and should be welcomed.

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, when machines are used in learning in schools there are more chances that any task

that is

given to student’s will be fully and completely treated within a stipulated time frame.

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example, some

students who used calculators during an exam competition with other schools scored higher than t

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of them or themselves

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competitors who didn’t, and were immediately given scholarships thereby saving cost of paying fees.

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questions

within the shortest space of time.

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, gadgets should be encouraged for

this

purpose.

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, the use of robots should be encouraged because it h

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an accurate result

accurate results

to task in f

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, machines provide solutions to problems with ease, the use of d

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the device

should be considered a great move in the society.

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South

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an maid

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the state or fact of existing

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no reasonable achievements seen in the society, as it were, machines have proven without any reasonable doubts to be reliable, accurate and fast

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Question: Do you agree or disagree that in the near future the role of teachers will be taken by technology?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on lerning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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