Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?

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In recent times, people continue to spend less and less
time
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at home. A
lot
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of factors are responsible for
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, and it
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also have
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also has
its accompanying effects on both individuals and the
society
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as a whole. One of the reasons for
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is increasing work load, especially among the working class in corporate organizations. People are in constant struggle to meet up with deadlines and deliver quality results.
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has made many people spend a
lot
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of times outside their homes working. Some
organizations even
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organizations, even
offer to pay workers who are willing to work extended hours. Another reason is industrialization. With industrialization comes with many opportunities.
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makes people migrate to industrialized areas.
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has caused congestion in most industrialized cities. In cities like
Lagos where
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Lagos, where
the major system of transportation is by road, people spend a
lot
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of
time
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in transit, and
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makes people leave their homes early and come back late. Some would rather sleep outside their homes to avoid traffic delays. One of the effects
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might have on individuals is
disconnection
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disconnected
from their families,
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has caused a
lot
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of people to miss out on some of the important periods of their growing children. Another way to look at it is the creation of employment for people in the
society
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as nannies. Since people spend less
time
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at home, they employ nannies to take care of their children. Thereby helping employment in the
society
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.
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,
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can
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affect productivity of some individuals. People rest more comfortably in their homes. And some researchers have linked resting
time
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to productivity. People that have more
time
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to rest tend to be more productive. Even though people spending less and less
time
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at home has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
bad effects, it
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has some good effects on the
society
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. People will generally appreciate spending more
time
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in their homes than they do now.
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