Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the modern days, entertaining industry is

gained

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gaining

more and

more intention

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more intently

from the society more than

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ever, thus

thus

a lot of famous people

such

as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid with high salaries.

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raised a concern that whether entertainers should not be paid too high wages and spend

those

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money

on other things or else.

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essay will discuss about

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content. Entertainers are those who have skills and talents to entertain other people through TV programs or internet. Since more and more people nowadays have access to the social media, many entertainment shows can draw a lot of audience and gain massive profits.

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leads to the reason why many famous people can have

such

high salaries as long as their performance is good enough. Some entertainers can’t use all of their

money

so they use it to fund other charities to help orphans, homeless, cancer patient and elderly in nursing home…

However

, not all famous people can act like that. Some of them make a lot of scandal which involving in spending

money

into bad things. So,

although

entertainments

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play

an important

roles

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role

in the society since they brings joy and fun to tons of people, not all of them should be paid with equally high wages. If they

have make

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have made

good shows and have a good life, they

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deserve

a good amount of

money

and if they don’t, the

money

that used to pay for them should be cut off and use on something else

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that's

worth spending,

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as other careers. Many jobs nowadays have much less of what they should deserve,

such

as teaching – a very important job but

have

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has

such

low salaries. In short, entertainers or famous people like film stars, pop musicians should be paid depending on their morality, and they shouldn’t gain more

money

than they actually need so that other careers

such

as teaching can have a better

wages

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wage

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