More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?

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It is believed
overtime
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over time
that many people are choosing fast
food
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instead
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of
home
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made meal. In my own view, there are many benefits of eating fast-
food
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rather than
home
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made meal. Admittedly, a major drawback of junk meal is that it makes
one
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very lazy.
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to say that when
one
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find himself or herself always eating from restaurants, the zeal and urge to cook will not be built
in
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on
into
the person.
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a lady who is fond of eating junks would grow with that and end up not knowing how to prepare good
food
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for her family when she is married. Another side effect of ready-made
food
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is that it damages the human body. Consuming Fast
food
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makes it difficult to control the sugar, salt and fat level in the body. And when
this
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is not put into consideration, it brings about sickness
such
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as cancer.
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, there are some benefits of ingesting fast
food
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as compared to
home
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made dishes.
One
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of
this
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is it saves
time
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. Especially for
one
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who is living alone.
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, a
splinster
an elderly unmarried woman
spinster
who closes from work can stop by a fast
food
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to eat as she would be tired to cook when she gets
home
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.
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,
this
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would save her enough
time
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and
also
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stress
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the stress
of entering the kitchen to cook after a long day at work.
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, ready-made meals are
also
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convenient, gives value for money and reduces
food
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wastage. Here, you
can i
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can, I
can I
mean
one
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can take his family to the canteen
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
variety
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a variety
of meals would be on the different dishes at the same
time
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. And knowing the quantity of meal to be
eating
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eaten
by each person would make the meal not the be a waste.
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, giving value for the money spent on the meal. In conclusion, while some of the cons of junk foods are the
medical
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medications
medication
side effect to the body like cancer, it's numerous benefits
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as the
time
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and stress it saves which is the
one
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that is
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incomparable to any of the detriments it may have.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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