Today, people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the advanced in communicating p
atern
a perceptual structure
pattern
patterns
patron
and
also
change in transportation method people have a
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an
option to choose a
place
for working and living. t
here
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There
are several pros of
this
c
hange
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change, then
then
cons.
Firstly
, an individual can decide a good
place
where they can can go and work as per their c
onvinence.
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
Moreover
commuting from one
place
to another have
also
become e
asy
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easier
due to g
rowing number
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the growing number
a growing number
of vehicles and
also
because of improved in public transport.
For instance
: if an individual is living in c
ountry side
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the countryside
countryside
and get a better job in c
ity
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the city
a city
he can easily accept it and can go daily.
Secondly
,
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,
getting a better life and good pay
also
take a person to d
ifferent
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a different place
place
or a country away from home
.
Accept space
.
m
oreover
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Moreover, this
Moreover this
this
opportunity of living a pose life is possible as we have lots of communicating gadgets available
.
Accept space
.
For ex. i
f
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If
a p
ersons
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person's
l
ives
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life
in c
anada
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
away from home town can easily communicate with their family member through video call, s
kype
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Skype
and gives a feeling of having a talk face to face. h
oweever
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However
Howeever
,
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,
t
heir
in or at that place
there
are
also
some demerits of living away and working
.
Accept space
.
s
ometimes
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Sometimes
a person a
re very much attached
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is very much attached
to near and dear ones that he g
et
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gets
a home sickness and need to live job or a
place
where he is living
.
Accept space
.
b
eside
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Beside
this
,
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,
living expenses
also
make it difficult to cope with
such
a s
iatution.
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
t
o
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To
encapsulate, even though advanced in t
echnologic
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
technological
d
evelopnment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
has g
ien
destroyed or killed
gone
given
better option for an individual to live a suitable life and work o
n
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with
our p
ace their
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pace, there
pace there
are c
ertian
definite but not specified or identified
certain
c
ritiria
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
which stops a p
ersn
a human being
person
to follow it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Communication technology
  • Remote working
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Urban congestion
  • Social inequalities
  • Transient populations
  • Globally homogeneous
  • Work-life separation
  • Connectivity
  • Erosion of local cultures
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