Today, people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

275 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Communication technology
Remote working
Economic growth
Cultural exchange
Urban congestion
Social inequalities
Transient populations
Globally homogeneous
Work-life separation
Connectivity
Erosion of local cultures

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Today, people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

With the growing population of cities, more and more people live in homes that have little or no outdoor area. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Technology)

Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, * describe the position you applied for * why you think the interview went well * why you need the result of the interview

Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.