Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places.

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Over the

last

few years, tourism has evolved drastically, and many people are going to places where it was earlier impossible to visit

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such

as the north pole, the amazon forest and the Sahara. These places can have positive or negative impacts on a person's life.

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essay will highlight the benefits and disadvantages of touring

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these extreme places. Vacationing

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these higher altitude places has become a trend,

however

, it can be very dangerous as they

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do not define

are not defined

aren't defined

climate pattern, any storm, thunder, rain or earthquake can occur abruptly.

Secondly

, these areas has lack of amenities

such

as hospital, hotels and eating places, so if any exigency

occurs there

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occurs, there

would be very low chances of survival for the patient.

On the other hand

, there are

also

some positives of touring

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areas like these which

are people

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are, people

get to view

new unknown

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new, unknown

places along with different species and habitat of these

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places

, for

exapmple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

, Antartica has many polar

bear

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bears

which are rare breed for a normal person, watching these rare animals can be euphoric.

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this

, tourists

encounters

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encounter

its greatest fear and learn's adaptation of weather and develops survival instincts. As as result,

person's

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the person's

a person's

moral get boosted and they become more confident in their daily life. In conclusion, difficult condition places has become a tourist attraction lately,

although

the feeling of visiting these places is sublime, it can be

also

detrimental on

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one's

life because of lack of utility and drastic change of weather.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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adventure
unique experiences
ecosystems
conservation efforts
economic benefits
environmental degradation
habitat destruction
safety risks
extreme weather conditions
navigation
high price tag
specialized equipment
influx
strain on local resources

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Fully explain your ideas

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