Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

No doubt

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the thing named or in question

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is for sure true that care is superior than cure, it is a possible

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to utilize country's budget, a greater proportion should be

transfer

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transferred

from treatment to be used for health education and prevention measures. In my

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opinion I

do agree that

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is a best

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to spend money on citizens for

there

of them or themselves

their

better health and to educate them for

there

of them or themselves

their

healthy

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life

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

style

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through which they do not need more treatments. According to me it is more

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best to use gourmet facilities in

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way

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. I totally concur with healthy living

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style it's

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style, it's

a best

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to generate

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environment for our new generation too,

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and for most it is so basic for all of us to live a healthy

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what ever

one or some or every or all without specification

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we can afford it or

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not, but

it is our right to live healthy, gourmet should have to open more gyms in parks which must be free of cost and

every one

all people

everyone

can utilize them according to

there

of them or themselves

their

free time there must be more social clubs for health information through which people should know about

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of them or themselves

their

diet plans

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is

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instrumental view, for healthy

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style

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. Take an example, when we use to eat so

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(quantifier used with mass nouns) great in quantity or degree or extent

much

junk food or even a normal food

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without

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night, then

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after having that we

fell

mat together and make felt-like

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so much uncomfortable and lazy too. But if we eat clean food

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internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of

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time and if we prefer walk after dinner so we can feel healthy and

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it helps in changing our physical looks. But there are so much

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benefit

in each age group our older citizens must need a healthy break from

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their

tough entire

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. They

must be educate

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must educate

must be educated

for

healthy

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healthy lifestyles

healthy lifestyle

a healthy lifestyle

life

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style

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for

there

of them or themselves

their

better living

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To sum up I must mention here some trends which are not possible without changing our

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standards. Treatments are

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so

important but

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important, but

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so we can be

save

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saved

from

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dishes

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disease

so we should not need that much treatments. Which you can

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analyse

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easy.