There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. Do the advantages of having a small family rather than a large family outweighs the disadvantages ?

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Around the globe, there is a visible upsurge
one
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new way or
partern
a perceptual structure
pattern
.
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is having a not too large family. So many homes are joining
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school of thought. The reasons may not be too
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far fetched
, considering so many situations around today are changing
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negative
.
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There
are lots of positives with
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approach and negatives as well,
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, I believe in the positives. Taking a deep look at
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, the decision to have a not too large family rather than a big
one
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is closely related to
population
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growth concerns. Dwindling resources
shows
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show
clearly there is an urgent need to curb
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population explosion
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the population explosion
. The more a family grows, the more resources that will be required to cater for them.
For example
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, China recently issued a decree making it compulsory for only
one
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child to be born in every home.
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is aimed at managing
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population explosion
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the population explosion
leading to more resources available to everyone. Closely related to above, is the fact that large homes in the face of dwindling resources can bring about poverty and hunger. So many people trying to get few resources. In the end, the family is the lowest unit of every society,
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will inherently affect the purchasing power in a negative way. It can
also
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lead so many people out of jobs due to having fewer jobs than the
population
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of job seekers. An example is India, if you go to Africa today, you would see that
indians
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indians
have far more
population
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than any other expatriate in the continent.
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is due to the fact that, they try to find work
else where
in or to another place
elsewhere
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of escalating
population
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growth.
This
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does no good
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for
the nations of the globe as a whole.
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, I believe wholeheartedly that the
partern
a perceptual structure
pattern
patron
patient
is a good
one
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and it should be adopted by every family to not only save our globe but
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the economy of the countries of the world.
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  • Supportive network
  • Cooperation
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