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Computer games has its problems. What are these problems and possible solutions.

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The
computer
game
 is an invention that has gained traction in recent times because of easy access to
computer
Suggestion
a computer
computers
the computer
. Overexposure to
computer
 games has detrimental effects on people and children that must not be overlooked. In
this
 article, I will be discussing the problems associated with playing
computer
 games and ways tackle them.
First
,
computer
 games inhibit
development
 in children. These growth areas include social and mental
development
.
For instance
, it has been reported in
literatures
Suggestion
the literatures
 that children of every age get stunted by overexposure and attachment to
computer
game
 when compared with their counterparts with lower exposure.
This
 results from loss in valuable
time
 that would have been spent interacting with parents, adults and peers because human interaction is required in building necessary life skills.
Moreover
,
computer
game
 addiction results in
time
 and energy wastage. Individuals that are into
computer
 games are blinded by their affinity and bias
for
Suggestion
to
 it that they fail to see the amount of productive
time
 they squandered on it. To forestall the inimical effects on the
development
 of children, guardians should ensure they limit the amount of
time
 a child is allowed access to
computer
Suggestion
a computer
computers
the computer
.
Thus
, children will have ample
time
 to interact with people and carry out activities that are capable of enhancing their overall
development
.
Besides
, education will help curb the problem of
time
 and energy wastage. Individuals that are affected by
computer
game
 addiction rarely see how it actually affects them.
Therefore
, showing them how
this
 negatively affects them will guide them in making
wise decision
Suggestion
wise decisions
a wise decision
 on cutting down on
time
 spent on playing
computer
 games, which will be greatly beneficial to them. In conclusion,
computer
 games are readily available and played by many these days. Playing
this
game
 has attendant inimical effects. In
this
 essay, I have carefully examined
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 pressing problems that are associated with playing
computer
 games and proffered solutions to them as well.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive skills
  • problem-solving
  • hand-eye coordination
  • social interaction
  • social isolation
  • educational benefits
  • learning experiences
  • health risks
  • eye strain
  • repetitive strain injuries
  • mental health
  • addiction
  • anxiety
  • economic significance
  • gaming industry
  • job creation
  • technological advancements
  • parental guidance
  • regulation
  • content monitoring
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