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The flow char shows how sweaters are manufactured in a garment factory in Bangladesh.

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This
 flow chart illustrates that the way of garment factory is manufacturing sweaters in Bangladesh. Overall, after the collection of yarn and with
help
Suggestion
the help
 of sixteen steps, shipment procedures for the product can be go ahead,
Firstly
, there is a section where yarn
need
Suggestion
needs
 to be winded and distributed. After that output product
go
Suggestion
goes
 to
nex
immediately following in time or order
next
 steps of knitting start of sweater panels and gradually it comes to the steps of trimming.
Then
 it goes to light checking and mending where the production check that if it any problem found
,
Accept space
,
 it will send
bact
Suggestion
a post
post
 to 2nd procedure of yard winding and distribution. Again, after completion of checking
,
Accept space
,
it comes to
next section
Suggestion
the next section
 of making
button hole
Suggestion
button holes
a button hole
. After that it gradually
follw
to travel behind, go after, come after
follows
 washing, labeling, ironing,
accordingly
. And after final inspection the product will be ready for shipment.

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