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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and the poor is ever increasing. what problems can arise from this situation. what could be done to address this situation.

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The financial difference between the higher and lower circles of the society are surging day by day and it has been proved by numerous surveys conducted.
This
 essay will discuss the negative impact of the situation and will
also
 present the solution to tackle those problems. It is irrefutable to say that the money is
necessity
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a necessity
 of life and if that remains with one part of the society,
then
 others will automatically feel frustrated and starts following the path of crime.
This
 is because with
rise
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the rise
 in global population the unemployment
also
 burgeoned, as an adage says that empty mind is
devil's house
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the devil's house
 so these jobless
person
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people
persons
 follow the perilous methods to fulfil their needs.
For instance
, the news feeds are full of daily stories that unemployed youths in fulfilling their desires get
on
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in
 the way of
felony
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a felony
. The need of the hour says that
education system
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the education system
 in most of the nation needs to
improvised
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improvise
 with
aim
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the aim
 of creating the entrepreneurship mindset of students
in contrast
 to
job seekers ideology
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the job seekers ideology
. It is due to the fact that even the gold
medalists
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medallist's
medallists
 wants to work for the prime organizations rather than trying to start up new venture that can create the job venture for others. To illustrate
further
, after passing out from esteemed educational institutes and getting hired in firm
such
 as Google, these individuals
works
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work
 for the company rather than someone working for them. To recapitulate, funds flowing to only
few
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a few
 of the bank accounts are creating the criminals in the
society those
Accept comma addition
society, those
 are in fulfilling the dreams are not only getting distracted from the path of success but
also
 destined to fall into dungeons. In order to tackle the catch 22 situation the education system needs
renaissance
the revival of learning and culture
Renaissance
 that should have goal producing the mindset of employers and not being
employee
Suggestion
employed
.

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