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Name: Dildar Singh Program: MENG (Industrial Engineering) Statement of Purpose I’m DILDAR SINGH, presenting myself as an applicant for a student visa to pursue the ‘Masters in Industrial engineering ' at the
University
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of Windsor, Ontario, Canada. In today’s
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, there are so many disciplines to choose from for everyone that lets students like me to choose the study of their choice depending on the passion that they have for the area they are interested in. I would like to take
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opportunity
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to thank the “
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of Windsor” for giving me
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opportunity
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to showcase myself. Educational background: As a child, I was always intrigued by the working of complex mechanisms and equipment. I used to spend a lot of
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trying to explore and figure out their principle. In school, I found myself drawn towards subjects that required in-depth analysis and logical thinking. I was awed by their simple fundamentals which form the governing basis for a lot of machinery. To understand these concepts, I took part in fairs and practical workshops.
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exposure taught me the importance of simple and practical
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. To understand the principle and practical aspects of designing and manufacturing, I decided to study Mechanical engineering in college, which deals with machine
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, manufacturing, and production. I did my schooling from M.D. Bhatt. Memorial Senior Secondary School, Ludhiana where I completed my 10th
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86.1% in 2010 and 12th from B.C.M. Senior Secondary School
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87.2% in Science (Non-medical) in 2012. I was the head boy of my school in both the secondary and senior secondary classes. After securing top marks in my school, I did my Under
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graduated
in Bachelor of Engineering - Mechanical engineering at Guru Nanak Dev Engineering College
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An Autonomous college, NBA accredited under Tier-1
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Washington Accord), Accredited by NAAC
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A-Grade) &TCS), which rank among the premier engineering colleges in India and graduated in June 2016 with an overall of 83.5%. I scored 5th Position in my whole batch (2012-2016). During my under graduation, I gained my initial formal exposure to Mechanical
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through courses like “Engineering Material”, “
Design
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of Machines”, ” Product
Design
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and
Development
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” and which opened my eyes to the latest materials and
design
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methods. The course in “Static and Numerical Method”, “Industrial Automation” and “Industrial Engineering and
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” highlighted the importance of effective team coordination for project execution in quality construction practice and exposed me to a plethora of applications of Industrial
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in Project
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. After my fourth semester, I did my six
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summer internship at AARTI STEEL LTD. My internship was on a
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work
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of Industrial
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- "How to reduce the machining
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of Guide Box". Along with that, I have
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done my online six
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internship in AutoCAD and SOLIDWORKS at RICCS Institute Ludhiana. In my minor project, I made
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with the help of SOLIDWORKS and ANSYS. My major project was on the “
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and analysis of Material Handling System”. The main purpose of using a material handling system was to reduce the manufacturing lead
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and Reduce product
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cost. These projects have made me run over new fascinating points, which helped me to learn and understand more about the subjects. These courses and projects have not only given me more knowledge of various aspects of engineering, but
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a defined path to turn my childhood interest into a lifelong passion. Apart from academic
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and projects, I am quite active in extra-curricular activities. I was the Head of Society of Mechanical Engineers at Guru Nanak Dev Engineering College Ludhiana. Here, I organized various industrial visits, workshops, exhibitions and technical events for students throughout the year
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EXPERIENCE
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After my graduation, I joined TATA Consultancy Services and I consider my
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experience
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at TCS – a well-known international company - as an asset for myself. I have been working in the Automotive vertical which comes under
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(Engineering and Industrial Services) since September 2016. For the people who are interested in the functional and mechanical understanding of
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the manufacturing industry
, it's a great place to be.
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offers
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a work environment
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the development
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the EIS
are predominantly focused on
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and
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(R&D), product
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and realization of new products in manufacturing. I was made responsible to provide technical solution, to help coordinate and prepare designs for various industrial projects and
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engaged in all phases of product
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for tools and mechanical equipment from conceptualization and sketching through
modeling
a preliminary sculpture in wax or clay from which a finished work can be copied
modelling
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, and testing.
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, I was a key member and advisor to track every detail of the business that happen between company and client with
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the help
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a CRM tool
. I have prepared numerous designs for
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the SEARS / KMART store
and Clearstream Bank using
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techniques (AUTOCAD, SOLIDWORKS, UNIGRAPHICS and ANSYS). I have
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done various
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like Engineering and Industrial Services
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- PLM Strategy Consulting,
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- Powertrain basics and Moldflow,
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-Flow Analysis. Why
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of Windsor? My decision of choosing
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of Windsor is not spontaneous. Only after doing thorough
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and interacting with alumni over social media platforms, I have found that studying Industrial Engineering at
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of Windsor would help me gain knowledge in various fields and expose me to best global standards. The program has courses which cover the core subjects in-depth
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as Project
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, Optimization, and Lean manufacturing and other value-adding courses like Computer-Aided
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, Advanced Manufacturing.
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of Windsor
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provides
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a Co-op program
which gives me an
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to gain industrial
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while studying. The
university
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has well-equipped labs, renowned faculty, and resources for engineers. The facilities offered by the
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will help me gain
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experience be
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experience, be
it social, recreational or my personal
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program brings together participants from all over the
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. So I would be in contact with diverse cultures and I would
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develop an international network. It would be very rewarding to share and exchange thoughts and ideas with a group of people who are from different nationalities, cultural orientations and schools of thought on one platform.
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represents the highest standard of achievement for universities in Canada and is duly affiliated and registered with most prestigious
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entities in Canada. The
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strives to maximize the academic success of each individual and offer
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provides
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an atmosphere
of relaxed,
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the largest
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point of view. Getting a Masters Degree in Mechanical Engineering (Automotive) from
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of Windsor can act as a stepping stone for success for me to embark on a fulfilling career. Why Master of Engineering – (Industrial)? During
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period, I had the
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to interact with top industry professionals and got to know about the importance of optimization and
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in business.
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, the problems we faced during manufacturing and interaction with professionals made me realize that
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and engineering are two integral
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parts
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incident has motivated me to do a Masters in Industrial Engineering. Industrial engineering is all about preventing problems before they arise, and to make things
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effectively and efficiently using various methods
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as lean manufacturing, supply chain
management
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, and operation
research
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. As an industrial engineer, I would be able to solve problems using
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techniques along with analytical concepts. I have understood that
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field is
continuously
seemingly without interruption
continually
evolving and requires professionals to be dynamic and adaptable. I believe
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field will make me improve myself and bring out the maximum potential in me.
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, I would like to pursue my masters in Industrial Engineering at the
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of Windsor. Why Canada? Choosing a
country
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for studies for an International student is a very important task, on par with choosing the right
university
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. A lot of
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is necessary to choose the right
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and for various reasons that I am going to mention made me choose Canada over the others. Canada was the
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and final choice for me when I was in a phase to choose a
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for my Masters course due to some
straight forward
free from ambiguity
straightforward
reasons. The
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system in Canada is top notch in all sorts of ways and ranked as the best
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in terms of
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in the
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.
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to that Canada is safe for international students and
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a peaceful nation with best health care facilities. Every institution in Canada stands among the top in their own specialized fields. Every college/
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provides a dynamic, innovative and challenging environment in which one can create and nurture their true potential. The on point
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, shape and precise architecture is only possible with cutting edge technology which is available in all the universities in Canada. Language Abilities
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As of my English Proficiency, I have taken
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the IELTS test and score
IELTS test and scores
overall 7.0 bands on the scale of 9 with each module score, Listening: 8.5, Reading: 6.5, Writing: 6.0 and Speaking: 7. I have
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attached the required documents for your reference. Financial Abilities:- I would
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like to highlight that we are financially well established in the
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. I have paid my One year tuition fees
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$17,000 to
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of Windsor and I have opened
student GIC account
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a student GIC account
the student GIC account
student GIC accounts
in Canadian Imperial Bank of Commerce (CIBC), Canada by depositing
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$10,000 towards my living expenses. Apart from that, my parents and brother have liquid funds (
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$50,000) in
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the bank account
a bank account
. Future Prospects and Plans:- After completion of my Master degree in Industrial Engineering from
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of Windsor, I would like to use my knowledge and
experience
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gathered for the betterment of my
country
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. The demand for professionals in Industrial Engineering is vast in India since it has plenty of manufacturers
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as Maruti Suzuki, TVS, Bajaj India, Ashok Leyland, and Mahindra. The investment in Industrial and Manufacturing productions is
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increasing
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of "MAKE IN INDIA" initiative by the Government of India. In India, there is a very great
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for Internationally qualified Industrial Engineers as Indian manufacturing Industry is a 4th largest in the
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India is a prominent auto exporter and has strong export growth for the near future.
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, I foresee a bright future with having infinite job opportunities open in
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the manufacturing sector
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a Master degree
in Industrial Engineering from
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of Windsor will help me to get into my dream job, as a Technical Specialist in any one of the above-mentioned Automobile manufactures. I am
honored
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
to say that I will be part of a field which can be the future of the Indian manufacturing market. Thank you for your
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and consideration. With Regards Dildar Singh

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