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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
technology
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 used to store, retrieve and transmit data or
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 using computer systems and networks is called
Information
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Technology
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. The
information
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technology
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 is not only makes our work quick and
easy but
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easy, but
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 save much time.
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, I
am strongly agree
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strongly agree
 that the benefits of
information
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technology
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 are more significant than its drawbacks. (54) We had seen in the past that people always move from one place to another in order to exchange
information
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 or data. There was no concept of transferring data online until the invention of computer and internet.
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,
information
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 handling was a big problem for people in the past. (49) Presently, the
information
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technology
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 is revolutionizing the entire world around us. It is not only changing our lives from home to work
place but
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place, but
also
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 providing us better opportunities during leisure time.
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, a pocket size cell phone always keeps you in touch with your family and friends.
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, the
information
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 we received through electronic media is actually possible due to the blessing of
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technology
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.
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, the use of cell phone in excess or watching T.V.
for
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For
 longer time is dangerous to our health,
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, its advantages are far greater than its disadvantages. (95) The recent development in
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technology
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 has transformed the whole world into
global village
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a global village
 in which everyone is able to send and receive
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 from far end. It has
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 enabled us to collect
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 even from other planets.
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, if the doors of
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technology
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 keep on opening,
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 we shall soon be able to step into a digital world. (61)
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,
information
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technology
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 is altering every aspect of our life and the benefits of
this
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 development are undeniable. (18)
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