Nowadays many students live with their familes while others go to another city to study at a university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios. Include relevant examples in your answer.

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their families
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an increase
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advantages
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student's
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forced
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an increase
in dependency is a drawback. Since parents provide all the needs during studying and by not allowing them to do simple household chores
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. Distance as a disadvantage of living alone because
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a family member
family members
since they need to travel.Their physical appearance is limited in times of dilemmas
such
as acquiring illness and hospitalization. In conclusion, having immediate familial support is an advantage when residing with them,
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an
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of responsibility
among those who prefer to study and live alone. The drawbacks are the dependency to family
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as you stay with them and distance as a
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disadvantage
when studying from a far location.

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