The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The
two
maps compare prices
Suggestion
maps, compare prices
and features of
two
student
rooms, one for
two
people and the other for one person at an Australian University. (25) Overall, the
student
room
for
two
persons is slightly more spacious and equipped with more facilities,
although
it costs less per person. In comparison, at 200 dollars per week, the single
room
is 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in breadth. The bathroom is situated at the top left corner which is opposite to the kitchen which has a sink, stove and microwave. The only study desk is between the bathroom and the bed, and television is placed
at
Suggestion
on
the wall opposite to study desk. Being 1.5 meter wide,
room
for
two
people charges 350 dollars weekly. The interior is almost similar to that of a single
room
with several
deviations
an army unit large enough to sustain combat
divisions
. Here,
kitchen
Suggestion
the kitchen
is arranged along the width of the
room
, giving space for table and chairs, study desk 2, and the television. The sleeping areas for both students are situated on the top and bottom of right side separated by
two
cupboards.
(
Accept space
(
154/130 excluding overall & in comparison)
Thus
,
student
room
for
single person
Suggestion
a single person
single people
is
expensive but
Accept comma addition
expensive, but
less furnished than a
student
room
for
two
persons. (18)
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