The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares the expenditure on different
consumer
products by the people of four European countries. (17)
Overall
, Britain spent the highest amount
and Germany spent the lowest amount
on consumer
goods. In comparison, English people spent 170 thousand
pound sterling for
photographic films which is the highest Change preposition
on
amount
spent on any consumer
item. The British also
spent more money than any other nation in
purchasing Toys, CDs and Perfumes. Change preposition
on
However
, their spending on Tennis racquets and Personal Stereos is relatively low, only 155 thousand
. The French also
consumed the maximum amount
, 165 pounds, on
Photographic Film. Their purchasing is almost identical for Toys and CDs, but they spent less than 150 Change preposition
of
thousand
on remaining consumer
goods. Italian citizens spent 150 thousand
on personal stereos and CDs. This
figure is five thousand
more for photographic films, perfumes and Tennis racquets, and around eight thousand
more for toys respectively. Finally
, the Germans spent the
fewer Correct article usage
a
amount
in
all Change preposition
on
consumer
items and their average spending is about 150 thousand
. (150)
Thus
, there are significant differences in spending habits within Europe. (10)Submitted by furqantaseer.ntu on
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