Nowadays environmental problems are too big for individual countries or people to solve. We have reached the stage where we need cooperation on an international level to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ecological system is vital for living things and day by
day it’s
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day, it’s
getting more and more polluted that one country or citizen of that nation cannot rectified but its need the collective support from the group of countries of the region to take the corrective action to save the environment for our future generation.
This
essay agrees that individual countries cannot deal with the environmental threats and need big support from other countries as well.
Firstly
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Firstly, this
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essay will discuss the problem associated with the
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
and why individual countries cannot
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deal
with it.
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, what benefits will be
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drawn
by cooperating between different nations.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • climate change
  • cross-border impacts
  • unified global response
  • biodiversity loss
  • geopolitical boundaries
  • international cooperation
  • renewable energy projects
  • collective responsibility
  • environmental degradation
  • international agreements
  • scope and impact
  • environmental challenges
  • policymaking
  • plastic pollution
  • marine environments
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