The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

There is no doubt that, almost every good and bad field has developed significantly over the past few decades and it is too

visiable

capable of being seen; or open to easy view

visible

in behaviour and actions of young people. As many people have mentioned that, in many cities around the globe rates of

crime

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by teenagers are increasing unexpectedly. The

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

as well as parents are trying to find

solution

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a solution

solutions

for

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international problem. Many people believe that, wisely chosen punishment is the best

way

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to control the number of crimes in society.

While

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

Well

, some of them believe that, it is not the only

way

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to reduce the level of

crime

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. They think that, there must be another

way

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.

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of all, no one can deny that, according to the recent figures, there is an increase in

violent

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violence

, robber and even murder crimes among young people. As many scientists have claimed that

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the main reason for

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is that, nowadays,

youth

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are growing

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is growing

with

lack

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the lack

of

pay

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paying

payment

attention by their parents but

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teachers.

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, children are not getting

social and emotional knowledge

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the social and emotional knowledge

at their schools.

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of all, action movies with murder, robber

are being

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is being

popular amongst

youth

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. It is clearly seen that, these

sort

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sorts

of movies lead to an increase

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among teenagers as they try to copy what they have seen in the movies.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, films have an important influence on young people who are influenced both by what they watch and hear.

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of all, nowadays, no one does amaze, when read

on

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in

newspapers

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the newspapers

and watch on the television about in most societies over the planet the number of

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is rising unexpectedly. In fact that,

youth

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are breaking

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is breaking

laws especially

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laws, especially

rights of people with

way

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of violence. From my point of view, the best

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to control as well as reduce the number of

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crime

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crimes

is replace severe punishments than

panleties

the act of punishing

penalties

are

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as, financial

and and

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

even being in prison.

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, lack of social and emotional knowledge is one of the main

factor

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factors

to increase

crime

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among

youth

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due to the government should more pay attention to both education and law systems.