Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money .others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations

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People should face different situations throughout their
life
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lives
. Situations keep changing with time. Many people believe that accepting
bad
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the bad situation
situation
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is the best while others argue that it is better to try and improve
such
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situations.I personally believe that efforts should be done to improve
such
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bad situations. Accepting the bad
situation
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sometime is worthy. There are the conditions where we can do nothing to improve
such
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situations. Situations
on
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of
in
human keep changing and it is only
matter
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a matter
of time
.
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.
To illustrate, we may not have
money
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with us
,
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,
we cannot go out to beg neither we can cry for
money
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.The only thing we can do is holding ourselves and fitting
ownself
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own self
with the
situation
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.So, whenever
such
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conditions strike
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conditions, strike
us we should accept the
situation
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with courage. To the other side of arguments
,
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it is useless doing nothing for the change of situations
.
Accept space
.
We must give a try to improve the conditions we are facing.
For example
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, we may have unsatisfactory
job
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or we may be facing
shortage
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a shortage
of
money
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and if we keep doing nothing
,
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,
we are not getting anything.
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, we must fight with the situations
,
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,
if we are not satisfied with
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job
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the job
a job
we must go out to find
new
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a new job
job
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and stick with the
job
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so that we can generate some
money
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. Doing
this
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will obviously
changes
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change
the worst
situation
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onto the best one. In my opinion, doing whatever
efforts we
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efforts, we
can to change
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can change
our bad
situation
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will be
the best
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better
the better
option rather than just accepting the bad
situation
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.In conclusion,
tackling worst
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the tackling worst situation
situation
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with continuous efforts and
hardwork
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hard work
are always paid off with positive results.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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