In many countries, a few people earn very high salaries. Some people think that this is a positive thing for the country. Other people believe that governments should not allow salaries to be over a certain level.

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There is a difference of opinion whether a small group of people who earn handsomely seems to have positive implications on the
country
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's economy or the governments should allocate salaries that does not exceed beyond a certain level. Before reaching any conclusion, it is important to discuss both sides of the arguments separately. On the one hand, many people concede that having individuals who earn handsomely, can have
positive impact
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a positive impact
by
thriving economy
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the thriving economy
of the
country
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.
This
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could be achieved as the
government
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embraces
progressive taxing system
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a progressive taxing system
, in which the more a person earns, he/she has to pay more tax to the
government
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. Those who opine in support of high salaries, cite to
India where
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India, where
mega movie stars
such
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as Salman
khan
a title given to rulers or other important people in Asian countries
Khan
, earn millions of dollars annually. Since the
country
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follows effective taxation system
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follows, effective taxation system
follows the effective taxation system
follows the effective taxation system the effective taxation system
follows an effective taxation system
, it
aids
make an addition (to); join or combine or unite with others; increase the quality, quantity, size or scope of
adds
them to generate huge
revenues which
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revenues, which
are
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used for projects that aims to help
general public
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the general public
of India.
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, there are many people who believe that the governments should set some fixed limit to the earnings of an
individuals
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individual
as it can create disparity in a society. They believe if no limitation is set on the amount earned by individuals, greed could emerge.
As a result
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, rich aims to become richer at the expense of poor people. In Pakistan,
for instance
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, sugar mill owners are in competition with each other, thereby setting up their own significantly high cost price for sugar. According to the Economist Report 2017,
although
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there was an exponential surge in the profits of renowned mill owners
,
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,
but it has created a huge burden on the poor people of Pakistan. It is reported that they tend to use
this
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basic commodity occasionally. In conclusion, I believe that the
government
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should set up comprehensive policies, irrespective of how handsomely a person earns.
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, effective tax collection from the rich would allow the
government
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to help alleviate the problems faced by less privileged people of a
country
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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